Posts Tagged ‘ headlines ’

Bad comma placement makes me want to thigh

February 14, 2010
By Billy Dennis
Bad comma placement makes me want to thigh

Via the Dayton Daily News: Just because a comma can sometimes take the place of the word “and,”  it’s not always such a good idea: I have an image of a dismembered leg flopping around until it bangs against someone’s front door.
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Media: Winning headline keeps readers on their tip-toes

August 10, 2008
By Billy Dennis

I don’t give the folks who toil away on the copy desk enough credit. So, I am pleased to give the award for Best Use of a Pun in a Headline  to whatever evil genius created the one that ran atop today’s Peoria Journal Star article about the Peoria Ballet’s new facility: “Tutu to-do.” Like I...
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Questionable headline above city council article

March 8, 2006
By Billy Dennis

Just five paragraphs (none of them the lede) of Jennifer Davis’* article about last nght’s Peoria City Council meeting was about the city agreeing to pay $163,000 to a bar owner for havign banned wet T-shirt contest. But the headline above the story read: Council OKs wet T-shirt settlement. Well, anything to sell newspapers, I...
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And Mrs. Railroad isn’t too happy about it

August 18, 2005
By Billy Dennis

I learned in journalism school that a good copy editor has to have a dirty mind, because the readers certainly do. Take, for example, this this headline from the Journal Star: Railroad pulls out early Perhaps Viagra might help. Pioneer Railcorp,Guy Brenkman,Kellar Branch,PAMBA,Rock Island Trail.Journal Star,headlines
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